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Thursday 16 April 2020

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Room 7 won a prize for having the tidiest classroom. The prize was an all you can eat experience at McDonalds! Only things got kinda crazy… maddy ordered 1000 cheese burgers and gabby ordered 500 fanta’s. The whole class was ordering a lot of food and drinks it was chaos, but Mr Goodwin, our teacher just ordered a cheeseburger. The thing was that the people who work at mcDonalds were rushing a lot because there was a lot of kids to feed.




Everything started breaking in McDonalds the fanta machine started breaking and the ice cream machine started breaking. We all had a sugar rush. The floor got all messy because all of the food was everywhere and the other people there could not get out of the shop and if someone
wanted to get out of the shop they could not because all of the kids were there at the door.



Then Mr Goodwin had a thought it was, if he went to a different Mcdonalds he could get the biggest ice cream and he will take it back to the other mcdonalds and then the whole class would go to mr goodwin and then he will drive all the way back to school. Then give the ice cream to them so he did that. When the whole class ate the ice cream they all got sick. So then the whole class was not so clean.




The cleaners of the school came into the classroom and they were terrified of the smell and the classroom was so messy because there was vomit everywhere. The classroom smelt like vomit because there was vomit all over the floor in the classroom.



Gabby and maddy learnt with there class to never over eat at McDonalds but it’s nice for a treat once a week.

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2 comments:

  1. Hi Gabby - I really loved your story about your whole class going to McDonalds - it was very entertaining and I could just imagine the mess. Chaos is the perfect word to describe it and is one of my favourite words. Wow fancy ordering that many burgers! I am glad it was just a fictional story. Or was it? Have you ever been sick from eating too much?
    Keep up the good work
    Kind regards
    Mrs McMillan

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  2. Hey Gabby,

    Wow I really enjoyed your story. I was hooked straight away with the "all you can eat experience at McDonalds." I would really love that lol I laughed when Maddy ordered 1000 burgers, that is so many! I wonder how she would feel after eating all that. I'm so pleased to see you blogging throughout the lockdown!!! Well done Gabby, keep it up X

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