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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Thursday, 18 February 2021

letter

 Hello I'm Gabby. I am 10 years old. This is a message all about global warming. Global warming is not good. This is what happens.  The sea is rising, temperature rises, water shortages, increased fire threats, drought, weed and pest invasions, intense storm damage and salt invasion. But how we can stop that here is the answer: stop buying a lot of meat and eat the food that you buy. Save water and a lot of other a lot of other things. 


Thursday, 11 February 2021

The rip

today we read a story called the rip and this is what happend 

 

Wednesday, 10 February 2021

Active learner

Today in Literacy we talked about What makes a good learner. I created this word this art to show the qualites that I think makes a good learner 

 

Wednesday, 6 May 2020

Letter Writing -Jacinda Ardern

Dear Rt Hon. Jacinda Ardern


~MY name is Gabby. I am a 10 year old at pt england school. I love that we
get to learn online. I have one brother who comes to the same school as me
and I also have a brother coming on the way. I have been doing a LOT of
work online and every day I wake up at 6:00am and get ready for school
and every night I go to bed at 7:00pm. I do sometimes wake up very early.


~You have been doing such an amazing job of being the prime minister.
Everybody loves that you are doing your job very well. I like that you are
taking care of the NZ people. We always pray for you to have wisdom when
we go to bed at night. We hope you are getting a lot of sleep from doing all
your work.    


~for the people who have lost some of their family we could have a stachow.
A mum and a dad with their  child there will be a sign that says we stay at
home to be safe. But it could say something you want it to say. 

Yours Sincerely,
*Gabby


Monday, 4 May 2020

Story starters Star Wars

Story Starters…
STAR WARS
Length
Bronze medal 2 paragraphs
Silver medal = 3 paragraphs
Gold medal = 5 paragraphs


Favourite Movie
Which one of the Star Wars movies is your favourite, and why? Give three reasons that the
movie you chose is your favourite. Think about aspects of the movies such as the story line,
characters, suspense, and special effects


Favourite Character
Describe your favourite Star Wars character. Describe both what they look like and their
personality.


New Star Wars Idea
Do you have a story idea for a new Star Wars movie? Write a letter to Disney in which you
present a summary of your movie plot idea. Then include three strong reasons why Disney
should make your movie.


Start Writing below




My favourite star wars character is Princess leia organa. She is a spy/warrior for her planet
Alderaan. She is a princess on her planet. She is brave and a great leader. She is the sister
of Luke Skywalker.


She has her hair in buns on the both sides of her head. She wears a white long dress with a
belt with white boots. She carries a blaster with her which is a weapon for protection when
Darth Vader boarded her ship.

The original actress of Princess Leia was played by Carrie Fisher in 1977; she died at age
60. I like Princess Leia because she is a good person, on the good side and she is a spy.

Thursday, 30 April 2020

Write your own Mystery story V2



Write your own Mystery story


1. Pick one of the three mystery scenarios:
Scenario 1
Scenario 2
Scenario 3
Someone has eaten Hulks sandwich at Avengers Tower HQ.


Clues
Spider Webs
Fortnite on the playstation
Iron Man's sunglasses
Ant man’s wallet

Suspects
Ant Man
Thor
Iron Man
Spider Man
Mrs Nua discovers that a teacher has faked being sick. She’s just not sure who.


Clues
A witness claims to have seen a teacher at the movies.
The Pt England School discount was used.

Suspects
Mr Goodwin
Miss Tuia
Miss Parrant
Someone has stolen the teachers lunch.


Clues
Muddy shoe prints
Crumbs
Teachers keys in the door


Suspects
Your Friend 1
Your Friend 2
Your Friend 3


2. After picking your scenario, write your own mystery story. 
> In your story you are the detective that’s been called in to help


Length
Bronze medal 2 paragraphs
Silver medal = 3 paragraphs
Gold medal = 5 paragraphs


Start writing below:




Someone has stolen the teachers lunch. We don’t know how but they left behind muddy foot
prince crumbs and the teacher keys in the door. My suspects are maddy , jad , adriana they
are my friends they all work in the staffroom. So first i went to maddy and ask her questions
and my first question was what is your favorite food maddy said hamburgers and sausages
and noodles I said do you like vegetables she said sometimes i do but today i don't so maddy
is off the list


The rein  I said, do you like vegetables because there are vegetables in it? Our next suspect
was Jad. I found her eating some food. I told her the same question as the same as maddy.
She loves  vegetables. When I put my glasses on she had sandwich crumbs that was a clue
and when she walked out of the room there were mudd prints but there were No keys so I let
her go.

It was time for the last on Adriana she was making some samwidges for the teachers it was almost lunchtime so i had to hurry up i asked the same questions that i ask the other two girls
she loved vegderbils but she had no evidence 


When i was walking back with adriana I heard someone in the kitchen we went closer and
there were teacher keys in the door and it was jad she was taking all of the samwich we
shouted got ua she was the feith. That had been taking the samwidges 


THE END  

Friday, 6 March 2020

My monster



My monster has green saliva dripping down its bright red mouth.My monster has 3 hands and sharp nails and only 1 finger on each hand. Tiny legs with tiny feet.My.My monster is very nice but sometimes he gets angry and smashes everything around the house.
`On Wednesday my monster woke up and said good morning to his teddy bear and went to the bathroom and brushed his teeth with slimy gooey stuff. Then got changed into his fury cot . and brushed it.

Tuesday, 15 October 2019

Answer Garden

This is all of the things i like to do when i am acting.

Monday, 19 August 2019

The most dangerous writing.

This is my writing about a car stuck in a pool.It was callenging I completed it I got shocked when I saw the picture and it is a speed writing it was 5 minutes.


There was a boy namd jefe he in his car it was plastick of cors but when he was 5 years old got a newe vcar it was a coll one but then hit family moved to a nuow home tay had a pool there but he had No were to drive so he drove a round there pool e was scerd coues no one was there to watch him but one day he was driving in his fack care he fell in the pool .
10 more years later he was driving in his rell car but then he was on his phone he was on his gemal e looked up he sore his clere road so he drove but he looked up a gene e was
about to go in somones home but he jumpd out of his care
but is care was still going

Wednesday, 15 May 2019

The Hidden Temple Writing

As I was walking in the forest I came across a hidden temple and on the temple were ancient carvings. There was a swamp and as I was walking I put my hand on the ancient carvings. I could feel the bumpiness, moss and there were a lot of rocks. I heard water dripping and birds tweeting and I could smell fresh air and the swamp. I could feel water. It was soaking in my shoes and I stepped in a pool of mud.

Thursday, 7 February 2019

About me


Talofa lava my name is Gabby. My Teacher is Miss West and I am year 5 at Pt England School. My favourite food is chicken and rotties. In the weekends I play Basketball with my dad on the rode . I have two bunny and I love playing with my bunny