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Showing posts with label Writing2020. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing2020. Show all posts

Wednesday, 14 October 2020

Holiday Memory Recount

 On a sunny day me and my brother wanted to go to the beach. We went to go and ask my dad. He said yes. So we got some food and togs .We got in the car and started driving to the beach.we were all so excited to go to the beach.



When we got to the beach the sand was hot and the water was cold.we got the beach stuff and food out of the car and went down and set it all up. When we had finished setting the stuff up. We were starving when we got there so we had some food. When we finished eating our food we started playing.




Me and my brother were building sand castles. Just then we had a great idea. The idea was to buried  us in the sand . At first we dug a big hole that I could lay down. Then my brother put all the sand on top of me. Then you could only see My head. Then it was my brother turn to be buried. My dad buried him and then All you could see was his head. 



After all that fun we went to go swimming. The water was freezing cold but then when i was in the water it was not cold so my brother came in but he doesn't like the water so i was surprised we got our boogie board and went on the waves aren't that big so we hopped out of the water  and went back up to the beach and we told our dad we were ready to go home 





So we packed up and went to the car. As we were driving my dad stopped at the dairy and we got some pies and an ice block. And went back to the car and started driving home. When we got home I got dressed  because I was still in my togs and then we went to go play outside. 



The end  



Monday, 31 August 2020

Friday, 28 August 2020

Monday, 17 August 2020

My Canadian Adventure


Monday 17th August
Dear Diary, 
 Today i am going to Canada. I can't wait.  13 hours later. I woke up and I saw canada. I got off the plane and got my stuff. It was so exciting that I am in Canada right now. i got a taxe and road all the way to winnie peg. I cannot wait to do my shopping. First I'm going to go shopping and go look for some new clothes really warm cloths. then I'll go into my new hotel which means i was staying in the forks hotel i was sososo happy.I unpacked all my stuff. After  I unpacked  all my stuff I went to sleep because it was very late I had been shopping for about 3 hours but at least I got some good clothes. Then I went to sleep.

 It was a new day . I woke up and  had my food and got changed. when I was on my walk I saw someone that I knew from New Zealand it was unbelievable it was my best friend Jade we ran up to each other and we hugged each other it was amazing that we went to Canada at the same time and we were at the same place I told her do you want to come for a trip with me to the skate park she said sure. I told Her when we were leaving we were leaving tomorrow at 12:00 pm  to go on the bus and make sure you bring a skateboard

So I went home and I got my clothes ready  for the next day. Finally it was the next day  . I got all dressed to go to the skate park I was so excited that my best friend was coming with me Jade and it was almost 12:00pm. So I hopped in the taxi and I went to the bus stop and waited and waited for her and then I saw her. Are you excited to go to the skate park . She said I couldn't go to sleep till 12:00AM  last night so sorry if  I am a  little tired I said that's ok I was very excited too.  then the bus came. We went inside it and went to the top story of the bus. It was so exciting that we were going all the to a skate park . I asked her what we should look at first and she said we should go see the statue of Winnie the Pooh. I said that we should go skate boarding because i love skate borading at leats i braning 2 skate board with me . she said that is a great idea and then we should go and get some food for lunch and then go to the skate park .I said that i said  is a great idea.

The Forks Skatepark Bowl - Winnipeg, Manitoba, CAN | Skate park ...Hotel Inn at the Forks, Winnipeg - trivago.ca
 After we did all of that we said our legs are sore and our stomach is full so we should go home now. I said that's a great idea Jade let's go home. So we went on the bus and went home. It was very late. It was 4:00pm and we had been there for 4 hours. That is very long but at least we had a lot of fun together.  I said to myself I cannot wait to go to bed.


 Then I fell asleep and it was the next day we had been there for 3 days well I have been here for 3 days. It was time to go home so I packed my bags and went to the airport and the funny thing was that I saw Jade and she was going on the same plane as me. I told her should we sit next to each other she said sure so we went on the plane and we sat next to each other.  for 13 hours that is a long time to be on an airplane but if you're from New Zealand and you wanna get to Canada that's how long it is but at least we had a lot of fun.   




THE END   


Friday, 5 June 2020

The day Vesuvius Erupted Diary


Dear Diary, 
What an unforgettable day!  I was busy collecting water from the well, when the sun mysteriously disappeared from the sky.

I looked up and saw big black clouds. It felt weird I had no idea what was going on. Then I looked at everybody and everyone was running. I asked someone what was going on. They said run the volcano is erupting i said what how.


I looked at the volcano and it was erupting so I started to run and run. When we all jumped on the we went out to sea we were all safe. But now there was nowhere to go so we stayed there for 2 days then we went to  go and see what there finally was some land we went to and see if it was safe it was there was some food and other staff.


The end   

Thursday, 4 June 2020

Discovery of Chocolate


On  a sunny morning. We all woke up and went to get some food for the morning. We all went and got some fruit and we all were still tired. I went with my friend to go and get our breakfast. When we were walking we sore something that we had never seen before but we walked past it and ignored it. 


But then we saw it again and we went to go and look at it. It smelt very nice so we picked it and took it back to the village with it. We showed everyone that they had no idea what it was so we wanted to taste it. It was really dry so we put it in water and it tasted so good.



I gave it to some of my family; they loved it then we gave some to our village. But we did not know what to call it. I knew what to call it chocolate. It was perfect. 

The End 

Tuesday, 26 May 2020

Gabby of Megatron's Hunt

On a Sunday night we were having our movie night. It was so cool. We watched Transformers. It was awesome but we stayed up till 10:00pm so that was not good.
But then we all went to bed but it was hard to go to sleep. We all were dreaming about trams forms. 


It was time for school and we all woke up and got ready. When I was getting ready i cepet on seeing things. It was weird but I ignored it. Our mum took us to school so we got in the car and my mum drove us to school. 


When we got to school I hopped out of the car just then the weirdest thing happened there was a tranceform it was not any old transformer. it was Megatron i was not dreaming he was standing right in front of me it was crazy.


I said Hi i was shivering in fear was he going to hurt me or be nice to me. It was incredible he said Hi he did not hurt me. Then my brother said hurry up we're going to be late. When i looked back He was gone. I never saw him again   

  

Friday, 22 May 2020

Rainbows End Writing task



One sunny morning, Miss West decided it was time to face her fears and go on a roller coaster for the very first time. She packed a bag for the day, got in her car and headed off to Rainbows End. when she got to rambozend she saw the big rambozend logo she was nervous of the day ahead of her.


She got her wrist band and went into rambozend she looked around her. She was ritend when she saw the big drop. She silently knew that she did not want to go on the big big drop. So she kept on looking for one she wanted to go on. 


She was looking and looking and looking she went past one it looked very scary it was going up and down. She looked at it again and said i want to go on that one. It looked very cool but scary so she went and waited in the line.

When she got on she had No time to return back now. The roller coaster started she was scared when it went up and down she screamed at the top of her lungs she was turning around and around on the roller coaster it was a masing. It went faster and faster. But just then she passed out. It was an believe abile. 

When the ridd stopped someone had to wake her up but. Just then the person next to her woke her up. She felt dizzy when she woke up. That was when she never wanted to go on that rid again 

                                               The End      

Thursday, 21 May 2020

White Water Rafting Story Starter

“Are you coming or not?” she demanded as she took a few steps further into the boat and then
off we went we were having so much fun and we were getting wet but that was ok. Everyone
screamed and while we were going through rough water, everything was very fast. 

We all had hard water coming up. When we went closer and closer it got louder and louder.
It was a water full we all screamed at the top of our lungs we were going down the highest
water full we had ever seen. It was a masing. But just then there were rocks and mine water
fulls it was going to get rufe 


We were getting closer and closer. Swosh we were in the craziest place on earth. The boat
was getting filled up with water. It was just like a pool but a floaty pool. Just then everyone
screamed there was another water full it was bigger we all sore the other people but when we
were distracted we went down the waterfall when we got down we were not on the boat we
were half in the water and half out of the water and the boat was sideways it was funny. So
we hoped out of the boost and toke it to shore 

                                                                      The End 

Wednesday, 20 May 2020

Bungy Jump Story Starter

Today we are writing about Bungy Jumping . this is my story about  Bungy Jumping hope you enjoy. 


I’m standing on the edge. It’s too late to back out now. The rope and harness
feels tight around my legs, yet my legs feel like jelly. I can’t believe I’m about
to bungee jump. I feel nervous I have butterflies in my tummy. But I was
excited that I was doing this. I had wanted to do this since I was 7 years
old. Everything was coming to real life


One of the crow men came and carefully told me the instructor when I got
to the bottom and the instructor how to jump off the edge when he had
finished telling the instructor he said get ready to jump. I looked at the
water and shut my eyes and jumped.


Everything blacked out when i jumped it was exciting but frightening
when i was close to the water it stopped it was all finished i was hanging
upside down it was weird because all of my blood was going to my brain
i felt a little dizzy but just then they had poled me up it was the fun it thing
in my life i wanted to do it again. 
   


                                                                        The End     







Tuesday, 19 May 2020

Letter Writing - Adam Brown


Dear Adam Brown,
My name is Gabby and I am 10 years old . I go to pt england school and
i have one brother and another coming on the way. In level 3 i had been
staying home and doing my work and staying safe 

Thank you so much for all your hard work that you have been doing and
making the ICU running somely and looking after the patients in the
hospital.

Thank you so much for being ready for all of the people that need help

and i hope that you are having a great lock down and thank you for
keeping the patients safe.

Yours Sincerely, Gabby 


Monday, 18 May 2020

Jacinda Ardern

Letter Writing - Jacinda Ardern



Dear Jacinda Ardern,
My name is Gabby. I have a little brother and he comes to the same school.
I have been going to  Pt England for ten years. When i was in level 4 i was
Staying home and being safe and doing my work with my class online. In level
3 I had been playing with my brother and doing my school work and staying
Safe at home too.


Thank you so much for keeping as safe at home or wherever we are and keep
us. And thank you for doing a lot of work and making hard decisions for us
To  be safe and happy. 


Thank you for making these hard decisions for as and I know it must  be hard
For you. I now that you can do all of this i hope you will have a great lock
Down.


Yours Sincerely, Gabby

Monday, 11 May 2020

Life in the 90’s Interview

Life in the 90’s Interview Today we are learning about the 90’s it is really cool for there  stuff they had back then i hope you enjoy my blog remember to leave a comment on my blog  
Remember the 90s? - CUInsight


  • You can easily interview someone from your Whanau (try your parents of even better your grandparents)
  • Email a teacher at school

Ask them these interview questions, and write down their answers.


Who are you interviewing?

What is their name? (remember to be cybersmart - no last names)
-my dad 

How old were they in the 90’s? (they might say something like “in my 20’s” or “a teenager”)
-15

Questions to ask the person you are interviewing.

Tell me about what School/ Work was like for you in the 90’s
-lost of writing and lot of drawing on paper and lots of sports  

What was your TV like in the 90’s?
- it was very awesome because all movies and tv shows were all different  

How did you contact your friends in the 90’s?
- when you would see each other they will make a time to met 

What was your family car like in the 90’s?
- it was big and fun with the set player 

What was your favourite thing about the 90’s?
  • There were lots of memories playing like playing cricket and rugby on the street  

Question for you to answer.

Based on the answers you received. Do you think you would like living in the 90’s?
- Yes/No

Why?
- because you would  play outside and you would probably stay outside with your friends and you probably would not spend time on the TV . And everyone was nice and everything would be good 

           

Friday, 8 May 2020

Julian Movie idea

Script Ideas

Length
Bronze medal 2 paragraphs
Silver medal = 3 paragraphs
Gold medal = 5 paragraphs

New Movie Idea
Do you have a new idea for a new movie? Write a letter to Julian in which you present a summary of
your movie plot idea. Then include three strong reasons why Julian should star in your movie.


Start Writing below


It was a sunny day we all were at pt england we all were playing outside but then there was a call on
the big speaker it said everyone please come to the hall because we have a big big surprise so we all
went to the hall.

Mr Burt said  all of you kids and adults have a big surprise for you. We all started talking. It was so
surprising Mr Burt told us all to be quiet. Then the lights darkened and music started playing. It was
so cool. Someone said Hello everyone then the lights came back on it was Julian Dennison we all were
so astonished that Julian Dennison was here with his brothers…


All of the girls screamed oh my gosh we so surprised it was a dream come true for us when that was
all done everyone wanted to play with him but just then the bell went we all went to class. Julian was
walking to some classes to visit them, but there was something coming from the sky it was something
loud it was a black helicopter. We all were running away just then kids started geting sucked up and it
was the ones who were close to julian “The wanted julian '' for something but we did not know why they
wanted him.



Then people started jumping out of the helicopter. We were pretty scared. They were all wearing black
suits and they were in black ties and black glasses. Julians bodyguards came and picked him up and
started running because he was shocked that these people were coming after him his bodyguards ran
to the van and there they zoomed off down country they don't know why they were coming after him for
some reason he thinks he knows why it is probably because of

his necklace. It was very special to him. He's had it for his whole life and he never takes it off but when
he got it for his 1st birthday his mum told him to never take it off and always looked after it.

They drove to a tunnel which was abandoned in the 19th century. They stopped the car with Julian and
his brothers. The lead to a beach which was far far away. They were safe and so was the necklace. All
the pt england kids went home, feeling anxious and scared and Mr Burt did not know what happened
until Julian called him from the beach house. The End 

TO Be Continued