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Monday 19 August 2019

The most dangerous writing.

This is my writing about a car stuck in a pool.It was callenging I completed it I got shocked when I saw the picture and it is a speed writing it was 5 minutes.


There was a boy namd jefe he in his car it was plastick of cors but when he was 5 years old got a newe vcar it was a coll one but then hit family moved to a nuow home tay had a pool there but he had No were to drive so he drove a round there pool e was scerd coues no one was there to watch him but one day he was driving in his fack care he fell in the pool .
10 more years later he was driving in his rell car but then he was on his phone he was on his gemal e looked up he sore his clere road so he drove but he looked up a gene e was
about to go in somones home but he jumpd out of his care
but is care was still going

1 comment:

  1. Hi gabby nice writing about the red car stuck in the pool.Hope you make more fun dangerous writing challenge.

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